Magnolia woke up and found that the woodpecker had quietly left. Who told her the bitterness in her heart?
The oriole came again, with his singing and beautiful singing, but it still didn't sound rhythmic to Magnolia. The woodpecker is gone, leaving her where to wait, the taste of loneliness, who knows that it will be better to have the company of orioles. Different from before, oriole accompanied Magnolia for a period of time and did not feel the enthusiasm, happiness or sadness of Magnolia.
One day, oriole said to Magnolia, "Sorry, I can't give you what you want. You can come to me when you are lonely, but I have to go. It is better to be alone. " After the oriole left, he didn't look back. He knew that Magnolia had someone in his heart, and his first departure broke his heart, so there was no need to look back.
When the oriole left, Magnolia didn't say anything, because it was meaningless to say anything, so she watched him leave.
In Shan Ye, a beautiful magnolia flower is full of fragrance. "It's too noisy, you leave quickly, you disturb my dream." I opened my sleepy eyes and it turned out to be just a sentence in my dream. Look at the sun, stay healthy, I am here, I will always be here,
2. The composition continued to write the voice of fatherly love.
The crisp and melodious sound of the piano gives people memories of childhood;
The melancholy voice of pipa gives people nostalgic associations;
That voice gave me the power of love.
Things have been in a hurry for decades, so how can spring flowers and autumn moons be idle? In this fast-paced social life, people's ears are full of all kinds of voices, but maybe that voice will not be remembered-footsteps.
Dad has a unique pace, always rhythmic, like the beautiful sliding sound on the piano keys, like the crisp sound of "four strings singing together, such as spinning" on the pipa strings. Every contact between the sole and the ground embodies a sense of art. Once, I didn't realize there was love in my footsteps.
"Go to sleep!" Dad came into my room gently and said kindly, making my bed conveniently. I nodded and said, "OK, I'll sleep for a while." The brisk pace left me. Looking at the paved quilt and smelling the fragrance released from it, I feel that there is a caring smell in my footsteps. A strange feeling came to my mind.
Footsteps flow through my heart like gurgling water, nourishing my dry heart.
At night, I was awakened by a nightmare and heard a string of light, thin, cautious and steady voices coming to my room. I closed my eyes in fear. The door opened slightly, and I quietly opened my eyes a little. In the dark, I saw a tall body gently covering me with a quilt that had just been broken. Everything is so skilled, as if I can do it every day. Then he crept away again. Although it was light, I recognized the rhythmic sound. It's dad. I was surrounded by the warm current of my father's love and suddenly burst into tears. I can hear the concern and caution in my footsteps, like the cool summer breeze, which brings me coolness, makes my heart calm and hot, and makes me move forward.
Dad will send me to and from school every day. Every afternoon after school, what I look forward to most is to hear the familiar melody coming from the corridor, which will relax my uneasy heart. During the winter vacation, I went to school to make up lessons. When school is over, Goose Feather University opens outside. The students all went out to feel the pure beauty of white in winter, but I secretly closed my heart. Will my father come? I can't help asking myself over and over again. The class answers always float around: "Yes", "No" and "Yes" ... After school, all the students walked away smiling, only I was waiting anxiously in the classroom. When I was almost desperate and ready to go home alone, the familiar footsteps came, so eager that they seemed to have no rhythm. I can't help feeling happy. Go out and have a look, it's really dad. He's covered in snow! All white hair, like a snowman! He said apologetically, "It's too late to go back and get you a poncho." Said, and took out a raincoat with his warm body temperature from his arms. I couldn't help it any longer. I threw myself into his arms and held him tightly.
People say that my father loves me like a mountain. Today I finally witnessed this sentence. My father's love gave me the power to be happy!
Now sitting in the examination room looking at the topic, the first thing that comes to mind is the voice of love, because only the footsteps of love have a soul!
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3. "Kong Yiji" continued to write more than 600 words, so it said: "Longyou Shoal was beaten by shrimp, and the tiger fell to Pingyang and was bullied by dogs! Fortunately, I can keep my original idea ... and think about it without insulting the sage books I have read. " As the saying goes, people can't be rich outside, and horses can't be fat at night.
It is said that this Kong Yiji is really prosperous after transplanting new bones and organs, and one day he will see the flowers in Chang 'an. Since you are proud to be a secretary, you should be famous in the village.
This Kong Yiji led his entourage back to the Xianheng Hotel in Luzhen. The dust of years can sometimes change everything. Some people say that time is the best medicine.
But many times, time seems to change nothing. Over time, Kong Yiji, who had healed his scar, had long forgotten that people in Luzhen were not good to him. As soon as he arrived in Luzhen, he was anxious to pay back the owner's 19 money.
"* * Lake" is more than enough for Master Kong's entertainment, and he didn't forget to tell me in front of Master Kong that he must practice the four ways of writing the word "hui" that Master Kong once taught me. Even Ding came early in the morning to discuss with Master Kong.
This Kong Yiji is greatly flattered. I don't remember the humiliation of breaking my leg! -no wonder he has his own "native parts" in his body at the moment. They continued in the back room, and this Master Kong strolled out slowly, which startled the Jackets who were drinking outside. It's ten years in Hedong and ten years in Hexi. Who knows that Kong Yiji, who was once a joke, will return to China one day! Everyone knelt down and called "Master". Who dared to tell the story of "stealing books" and "stealing books" in those years?
It happened that there was such a guy who didn't know the depth of the story and asked about Master Kong's "legs". Kong Yiji, who has read many classics, naturally doesn't understand the economy, so he tells the truth. This ding listened, his eyes rolling around.
It is true that people say that "disaster comes from the mouth". The village became famous in Kong Yiji less than half a day, only to see Ding Ling and a group of people coming here angrily.
As soon as we met, Kong Yiji's official hat was knocked off first. People jumped on Kong Yiji's official clothes and kicked Master Kong away. Why do you think this is? But it turned out that there was a "book thief" in this Ding Tongmen. When he heard of Kong Yiji's "adventure", he told his boss at once and accused Kong Yiji of "stealing a column and listening blindly". Poor Kong Yiji is still a thief! This is still the place where maple leaves and mature rushes rustle in autumn. It is still autumn wind and autumn rain.
This Kong Yiji is like a rat crossing the street! Everyone who saw him in Luzhen cursed "thief!" Worse than the original situation! At this moment, the Mars robot appeared again, but before Kong Yiji could speak, he heard the robot say, "Give you a healthy body, and you still want to worship your ancestors and get promoted. I'm sorry, our experiment failed on you, and now I announce: cancel this experiment. " He put Kong Yiji in a big box again. After a violent vibration, Kong Yiji returned to the ravine in the wind and rain ... What dream? Dream? Dreams ... Many students are also good at using rhetoric to describe situations while telling stories, and the sentences are meaningful, which makes the fate of the characters more tragic and desolate.
Adding an ending to the story is just a continuation of the 1 method. The second method of compiling new stories: the method of expanding details. Among the classics, the most memorable ones are the wonderful details. If carried out reasonably according to this, it will be a vivid and interesting new compilation, even a wonderful masterpiece.
200 1 college entrance examination, a candidate in Jiangsu took "sincerity" as the topic, relying only on a detail in The Romance of the Three Kingdoms: "Guan Gong died, and Red Rabbit was won by Ma Zhong. Right is to give Ma Zhong a ride.
His horse died a few days without forage, and he cleverly conceived the sensational "death of the red rabbit." The third type: the deduction method of character combination: typical characters in ancient and modern Chinese and foreign literary galleries, legendary figures in Chinese and foreign history, brilliant. Making a variegated platter of a typical character around the topic is also a good seasoning for composition innovation.
On the topic of "direction", someone wrote an article on "New Methods of Learning from the Classics". On the way to learn Buddhist scriptures, Bajie always clamored to go back to Gao Laozhuang and ask Kong Yi to write an application. Wukong was bored and asked Ah Q to inform Tang Priest and let Bajie go back.
As a result, Wukong had to explore the road, eat, and look after the luggage for Friar Sand, so he was busy in all directions. In addition, Kong Yi is lazy, Tang Priest is serious, Friar Sand is dull, Ah Q always misses women in nun elections, and Wukong feels bored, so he can't help but miss Bajie, who is talkative and can do some small things.
Finally, I had to call Bajie back. Bajie was very happy to come back because he stayed at home all the time. So the six men and women went west again.
The Q version at the end of Kong Yiji can try to be bold and innovative on the premise of meeting the continuation requirements. However, we should pay attention to the following points: when making a new story-sequel, we must first conform to the characteristics of the novel, the plot should be relatively complete, and strive to make waves; The development and change of the character's character keeps continuity with the original text; Imagination should be reasonable, we should give full play to our creativity, consider the possibilities of plot development, and strive to be creative; Have a clear center and be consistent with the original text; It is best to describe organisms vividly, paying special attention to details.
Starting from the topic and connecting with the familiar original works, we should not only be familiar with the story plot of the original works, but also understand the background significance of the original stories and other related knowledge, so as to avoid the far-fetched content and arrogant knowledge of the new stories. Second, on the basis of respecting the factors of the original story, the relationship between characters and the basic character of characters, it opens up the topic of thought and gives people good enlightenment.
This requires a clear idea in combination with the topic. This kind of thought should not only conform to the topic, but also be enlightening, giving people a good education or enlightenment, or criticizing the falsehood, ugliness and ugliness in reality, or praising the truth, goodness and beauty in reality, or making useful reflections on historical events.
4. The poor continued to write "The Poor" and continued to write the sixth grade | 600 words | Other Zhu Yuxin and Sang Na opened the curtain.
In the white curtain with many patches, seven children fell asleep sweetly with sweet smiles on their faces. "Just bring them here. Just two children. We can feed them in a few mouthfuls. "
The fisherman said with a smile. Early the next morning, the fisherman went out to sea to fish. Sang Na looked at his back and anxiously drew a cross on his chest: "God, bless us."
However, it seems that God is going to test the sauna people. For several days, it was difficult for fishermen to catch a fish, and there was almost no brown bread at home. When he is free, Sang Na will sew and work as a helper in the richer families in the town. She is busy all day, but life is still hard to support.
Simon's two children started to have a fever for some reason, and Sang Na was worried that the family would collapse. But she never wanted to abandon Simon's two children.
Because there is no money, Simon's child's illness can only drag on like this. Sang Na and the fisherman were very worried, but they were helpless. It never rains but it pours.
After a storm, the fisherman got sick, too. Looking at the family getting sick one by one, Sang Na felt that he was going to collapse.
She can only do more work to support her family, and a little silver hair climbs up Sang Na's sideburns. Finally, the poor people who are equally kind around can't sit still.
Seeing that sauna is struggling to support the family, they feel they should do something. As a result, some money was given to those who had a surplus at home, and some fish was given to those who had fish ... In this way, with the help of people around them, the fishermen and Simon's condition gradually improved.
The fisherman went to sea before he was completely ill. This time, God began to care for them, and the fishermen could return home with full loads every day.
Five children in Sang Na can also help Sang Na do housework at home. Although life is still difficult, Sang Na and the fisherman watched the children grow up day by day and thought it was all worth it.
Ten years later, Sang Na and the fisherman finally brought up Simon's two children. They went out to sea with fishermen, and there were more people and more fish to catch. How beautiful the morning sun shines on their family.
Teacher's comment: Tang Xuecheng's comment: The Poor Man is an article by the great Russian writer lev tolstoy. The sequel of this paper naturally combines the plot with the original text, which is coherent and has a certain drama. The description conforms to the original style, and the plot develops reasonably, which can reflect the kindness of the poor and their pursuit of a peaceful and harmonious life.
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5. The "poor man" continued to write a 600-word composition "Oh, why do you think the same as me!" A rare smile appeared on the fisherman's mouth, and then disappeared on his thin face. The clouds that had just dispersed gathered in the fisherman's brow.
Sang Na also suddenly sighed: "Alas, yes, we will be sad in the future. What should we do? " "There will be two children. In the future, I have to fish more. " The fisherman closed his tent and sank for a while: alas, God has been working recently, and it is difficult to catch more. What should I do? The fisherman stroked the heads of the two children with his hand and said with a sigh, "Simon, how can you have the heart to leave the children alone?" How can I tell them when they grow up? " You are so cruel! "The two children seemed to understand the fisherman's words and began to cry.
So you have brought them back! ""I didn't think I would be one step ahead of you. " They all smiled heartily.
The next day, Sang Na put the brown bread on the table and picked up the children. The fisherman is out fishing.
6. The full text of Little Stone Pond is launched, with more than 600 words. We walked 120 steps from a hill to the west. Through the bamboo forest, we could hear the sound of water, like the sound of Yu Pei colliding with Yuhuan. We were very happy. So I cut bamboo, opened a path, followed the trend and saw a small pool, which was particularly clear. The whole bottom of the pool is a stone, close to the shore, and the bottom part of the stone rolls out of the water, forming caves, islands, cliffs, rocks and other shapes. Lush trees, green vines, covered with twisted, swaying and falling, uneven, fluttering with the wind.
There are about a hundred fish in the middle of the pond. They all seem to swim in the air without any support. The sun shines directly on the bottom of the pool, reflecting the shadow of the fish on the stone surface at the bottom of the water, without moving; Suddenly he swam away again. Come and go briskly, as if entertaining tourists.
Looking southwest along the pool, the stream twists and turns like the Big Dipper, bends like a snake, and can be seen clearly. The situation on the bank of the stream is jagged and you can't see the fresh water source.
I sat by the pond, surrounded by bamboo and Woods. It's quiet and deserted here, which makes people feel sad and cold. It is so quiet and deep. As this place is too deserted to stay long, I wrote down this scene and left.
The people who traveled with me were Wu Wuling and Gong Gu, and my younger brother Zong Xuan. As followers, we are followed by two young people, one is Cui, the other is Forgive yourself, and the other is Yi Feng.
7. The story of the cat continues to write 600 words. The first article: my date with the kitten, the friend I met in the community.
That night, I walked alone on the path, holding a bag of fish fillets and eating them with relish. Suddenly, a kitten jumped out of the grass. It seems that it must smell the fragrance. I threw a fish fillet to it. It waited for a while, found no hostility, and began to eat. I was about to come forward to contact it, but it picked up the fillets and ran away. We have known each other since then.
Is a very ordinary cat, skinny, all black and white patterns. I think it must be a stray cat, but it's too naughty to please! So, every evening, I will take advantage of my mother's inattention and go out for a walk. Of course, I won't forget to bring a pack of fish fillets. The kitten has become a frequent visitor in the grass and comes here to steal food on time every day. Every time, I watched it finish eating, and its back disappeared completely, and I was reluctant to go home-I was really happy to watch the kitten eat.
That day, I put a big bag of fish fillets and some shrimp skins in the grass. After a while, it did come. It looked around and saw that there were no enemies, so it gulped it down. I walked out of the corner and saw the cat's ears move, raised its head and put on a bully; As for me, I put on the gentlest smile and hope it will like me.
The cat doesn't seem to understand human laughter, and I see vigilance in its eyes. In order not to hinder it from eating, I had to hide in the corner again.
For safety, the cat ran away with food in its mouth. In the next few days, I didn't go down, and the cat left.
Mother knew, and said to me, "If the cat is gone, it will be gone. Please save some fish fillets!" " "Well, my lonely life finally had some fun, so I flew away at once. Part II: The story of my kitten Michelle. My good friend gave me a parting gift when she was going to study with her parents.
Cher is white and soft to the touch. Because Xueer is as white as Xiang Xue, it is named Xueer.
Cher was timid when she first came, just looking around with a pair of big green eyes. In order to make Cher adapt to the environment here, I brought her to my home and taught her how to live here.
Soon, we got to know each other and became good friends. Of all the people in my family, Cher and I get along best and closest.
Every day when I go to school, Cher always gives me a lift. After school, Cher also waited for me at home. As soon as she saw me, she ran to make out with me. When I do my homework, Cher will lie prone at my desk and wait for me to finish my homework before playing, which never affects me. I can't bear to let Cher wait alone for so long every time, so I often finish my homework as quickly as possible.
8. Fanka continued to write 600 words. Fanka saw a warm kang in her dream. His grandfather is sitting on the kang, his legs drooping, reading his letter. The loach walked up and down on the kang, wagging his tail ... At this moment, Fanka felt someone pulling his hair and immediately scolded: "Fanka, did you steal ink?" Fanka suddenly opened his eyes and saw the boss pulling his hair, still yelling loudly: "How dare you steal ink!" " ! Tell me, what do you do with ink? Huh? ! Ask you a question! Say it! "Then, the boss dragged Fanka to the backyard, gave him a good beating with a belt, and warned him," If you dare to do that again, I will starve to death! "Go and wash my clothes now, and don't eat tomorrow morning."
Fanka endured the pain, and after washing clothes, the sky was a fish-belly grey, and it was dawn. The guys got up, and one of them said savagely, "Your boy is brave enough. I'm afraid you will see death tomorrow. "
After lunch, everyone was outside in the sun except Fanka who washed dishes in the shop. After a while, I saw all the guys running in with an envelope in their hands: "Fanka, here's your letter!" " "Every card put down the bowl, was about to get the letter. One of the boys said, "Go and get us the wine first, and I'll give it back to you when I come back. "
Fanka put on the bottle and rushed to the pub as fast as she could. I didn't expect to meet the proprietress on the road. "You bastard, you stole ink last night and went to the pub to drink again today. You are simply lawless! " As he spoke, he kicked Fanka on the ground, and Fanka fell with a splash. The bottle broke and the glass slag plunged into his leg, which was terrible. When he returned to the shoemaker's house, the guys had dispersed. He opened the envelope and found it empty.
In the evening, Fanka thought that if she stayed here any longer, she would die. So, while everyone was asleep, he turned from the corridor on the first floor to the backyard, climbed over the fence in the backyard and went straight to the country.
During the day, the sky is clear and it snows heavily. Fanka only wore a thin and shabby dress and shivered with cold. In this way, Fanka walked, walked, walked, and unconsciously fell on the road to heaven.