First, pay attention to accumulation and lay a solid foundation
The new curriculum standard points out that Chinese curriculum should "guide students to correctly understand and use the Chinese of the motherland, enrich language accumulation, cultivate language sense and develop thinking". Life is the source of Chinese learning. The training of "100 new words" makes language accumulation, language sense cultivation and thinking development directly come from life. Ask students to record the news that happened around them that day, or what they heard, read and saw that day, with a length of about 100 words, so as to make the language concise and smooth. There is an essential difference between keeping a diary and writing something new with hundreds of words. We don't want to be long, we don't want much, we just want perfection, and we put more energy into "how to write".
Reading is a special kind of life. Newspaper clipping training requires students to newspaper clipping every day, starting from the theme, content and emotion of the article, or starting from the writing method of the article, adding comments, experiences and associations to the article. This kind of training not only broadens students' reading range and increases reading quantity, but also provides favorable conditions and broad space for students to choose reading materials and write independently, and implements the reading habit of "no pen and ink, no reading". There is an essential difference between newspaper clippings and post-reading. The latter focuses on "feeling", while newspaper clippings attach importance to students' evaluation ability, which is not only manifested in the "feeling" of writing content, but also in the "evaluation" of writing content, process and method, so as to appreciate the success of the article and establish their own composition standards.
The two courses are carried out alternately, which allows students to absorb nutrition directly or indirectly from life and also solves the problem of "what to write".
Second, news guides are easy to use.
The author thinks that composition training should go through three stages: mastering composition characteristics-mastering writing methods-improving composition ability through continuous practice. Therefore, in the designed composition training sequence (news writing training-imagination training-thinking training-language optimization training-research composition training), "news writing training" focuses on letting students master composition characteristics and writing methods, while imagination, thinking, language optimization and research.
The composition should tell the truth, the truth, the truth, and not lie, empty talk or cliche, but teachers need to repeat it from primary school to high school. With a simple and standardized structure (generally an inverted pyramid) and easy-to-master news (news) writing training, News Guide helps students quickly break into the kingdom of composition, firmly grasp the truth and novelty of composition content and emotion, and make the language concise and refined, which has since become a habit.
Strict requirements for authenticity in news writing can standardize students to write true feelings with typical examples; Strict requirements for news value can standardize students' writing new ideas and cultivate innovative spirit; Accurate, concise and vivid news writing language requirements provide training opportunities for changing students' flashy "student accent"; Observing and thinking about the process of news writing, so as to write news truly and vividly, is very helpful to cultivate students' interest and motivation in writing; Prose-style communication and complementary literary works have also found a new day for middle school students to learn literary language.
1. To determine the genre of composition, you must write prose (unless the topic requires other genres, but now most of them require unlimited genres. Why do you write prose? Because prose is characterized by "scattered form but not scattered spirit", and the materials we usually prepare are collected from various channels and are "scattered". For the same theme, we can integrate the daily collected materials into an article to form the same "spirit", which is an essay.
2. Determine the composition topic. How to write a good topic? We should use familiar songs, lyrics, allusions, famous sentences, proverbs, idioms or their transformation forms to make the topic fresh and moving, make the paper shine, or make a * * * sound, so as to achieve the goal. For example, "With struggle, is success far away?" "Open your heart and let honesty in" ... You have to ponder and experience this by yourself, and you will find the beauty and classics.
3. At the beginning of the first paragraph, you should write a parallelism sentence as soon as you start writing, and you must write a parallelism sentence, and pay attention to the fact that the number of words in three parallelism sentences is slightly longer. After writing three sentences, add one or two comprehensive sentences (that is, words related to the theme of the composition) and you're done. After writing the first paragraph in this way, the number of words is probably "four and a half lines on the composition paper", which is the most suitable and pleasing to the eye, just like the golden section. Do not believe that you can write four and a half lines on the composition paper now, which is really better than three lines, three lines, half lines, four lines and five lines. As for why it must be written as a parallelism sentence? Because, when the teacher who looked at the test paper got your test paper and began to read it, he felt a momentum.
4. The main part, that is, the second to fifth paragraphs (***4 paragraphs), can use a model. That is, write a comprehensive sentence (sentence) at the beginning of each paragraph, and then write some related sentences around it later, that is, the first sentence is the central sentence, and the following sentences are clauses, each paragraph is about four and a half lines to six and a half lines. The second to fifth paragraphs (***4) should be written like this.
5. In the last paragraph, take care of the title and the first paragraph, and only write something related to the theme of the composition (that is, "God") as the end. It is even better to write with a "meaningful" feeling. For example, adding an ellipsis after writing is an effective way. This paragraph is about four and a half lines of the composition paper.
6. Handwriting must be good, neat and careful. Sometimes the quality of words is more important than the content of composition! Remember, remember!
Expansion: junior high school composition 1
Books are the ladder of human progress, which shows the important role of books in human progress. Therefore, reading has become the daily life of young students in the 2 1 century, and they have to do it every day.
And this is my reading life: my reading life began in kindergarten. I read comic books in kindergarten. And with the growth of age, the knowledge level of books has also improved. Open the treasure house of memory, "100,000 Why" is in the most conspicuous position, followed by "Juvenile Encyclopedia". Newton, Edison, Madame Curie and other great scientists are waving to me and guiding me to a bright future.
In primary school, I fell in love with Four Great Classical Novels. Journey to the West vividly showed me the Monkey King's wit and courage, Tang Priest's bodhisattva heart, Pig's gluttony and laziness, and Friar Sand's honesty. Liu Bei, Guan Yu and Zhang Fei in The Romance of the Three Kingdoms are really amazing. Water Margin 108 Heroes gathered in the Water Margin, which deeply infected me. The confusing plots of various characters in A Dream of Red Mansions drive me crazy.
Now that I'm grown up, I've long forgotten "100,000 Why's" and "Youth Encyclopedia". I prefer history and novels. History books let me learn wisdom from ancient lessons, so as to better grasp the present.
In junior high school, poetry and songs fascinated me even more. "The desert is lonely and straight, and the long river falls in yen." What a magnificent sight it is: "But now I still remember that night, that storm, and I wonder how many flowers were broken." How miserable and desolate. "Every tree in Hanyang becomes clear in the water, and Nautilus Island is a nest of sweet grass." How desirable this is.
There is a passage in ostrovsky's book How Steel was Tempered: "Life belongs to people only once. A man's life should be spent like this: when he looks back, he should not regret wasting his time, nor should he be ashamed of doing nothing. In this way, on his deathbed, he can say,' I have devoted my life and all my energy to the most magnificent cause in the world-the struggle for the liberation of all mankind. "More inspired my fighting spirit.
Books make me read more, know more and experience more. From reading, I learned that if you want to read a good book, you must rely on tenacious perseverance and unremitting enthusiasm. This is my reading life.
Junior high school composition 2
Human life is priceless, created by our parents who love us the most.
Therefore, everyone must cherish life, grasp life and live a happy life. But if we don't take good care of our lives, we must do something that hurts us, such as taking drugs. Drug abuse will not only make people miserable, but also pay a great price, ruin the family and make them look haunted and listless all day.
Not only hurt yourself, but also hurt your parents' hearts, and waste your youth and life.
So what are drugs? Drug is a harmful drug, which can corrode people, make them lose their health and even take their lives. If you take drugs, it is difficult to quit, and it will bring many diseases and even lead to death. Besides, many drug addicts want to buy more drugs for themselves, but without money, they rob other people's wallets, steal money, kidnap and so on. These are all illegal things.
Therefore, taking drugs is dangerous and harmful. We primary school students should never learn common sense and never touch that kind of drug, otherwise we will regret it all our lives. If there are teenagers who take drugs carelessly around us, we should help them quit and send them to a drug rehabilitation center. Help and care should be given to teenagers who are recovering from drug abuse, so that they can have more confidence and perseverance in drug abuse, get rid of drug abuse as soon as possible and get a brighter and better life. So, refuse drugs and say "no" to drugs.
This is your wish and your goal. Only in this way can everyone's life be more colorful!
Rejecting drugs can make the world more harmonious and people happier, so if you want to cherish life, you don't have to doubt and reject drugs immediately!
Junior high school composition 3
When I was very young, as soon as I wrote an article about water, I couldn't help using that metaphor: the earth was covered with beautiful water-blue gauze.
When I grow up slowly, I know how many crises are hidden behind this "beauty". According to the data, China's per capita freshwater resources are only 1/4 of the world average, and it is one of the poorest countries in the world. The per capita available water resources are only 900 cubic meters, and the distribution is extremely uneven. At the end of the 20th century, more than 400 cities out of more than 600 cities in China were short of water, among which 1 10 was seriously short of water, with a total water shortage of 6 billion cubic meters.
However, the serious shortage of water resources did not wake us up. 20 13 years, the gifts we gave ourselves were those terrible "cancer villages". Just because of the continuous expansion of cities, the overuse of chemical fertilizers, and the wanton discharge of pollutants by various factories, the present situation of water resources is deteriorating, and nearly half of rivers and lakes are seriously polluted, causing them to become "poisonous water", thus inducing diseases.
In fact, when I watch the news, I am more shocked than scared. Growing up in such a land of fish and rice, how can there be such confusion? I am very lucky. The blue color in my memory has the vigor and vitality of "swimming with fine stones, looking straight at it", and also has the quietness and elegance of "the breeze is Xu Lai and the water is quiet". The blue color in my memory collects the laughter and laughter when I played with my childhood friends, and carries the most innocent time.
However, I just miss it. Although there was no serious incident like "cancer villages", I did feel the strangeness of the water in this city. In the past, grandma always liked to buy vegetables grown by farmers themselves, saying that they were fresher than those in supermarkets, but now she seldom buys them. It is said that it broke the news that those "fresh" farm dishes have been polluted by industrial wastewater because they were planted next to the factory. "The water is not good, eat food don't kill people! Unlike before, water is drunk directly! "Grandma doesn't have any scientific knowledge, but the phrase' bad water' made me think deeply.
Think about yourself again, the picture scroll of "Little Bridge Flowing Water" seems to have changed its taste as early as inadvertently. Jiangnan water town has long lost the life picture of women washing clothes at the water's edge; Due to lack of management, many small rivers along the roadside have become dirty and smelly. Occasionally, you can see dead fish and shrimp floating on the water with all kinds of domestic garbage. In the river behind the campus, there used to be countless teachers competing to fish there, but now it is lifeless.
Faced with these, we regret, regret and blame ourselves. When our economy develops rapidly and enters such an industrialized era, are Jiangnan people willing to pay the price of water resources? As a land of plenty, Kunshan has more responsibility to protect water resources than other cities. It should also be more clear that this is not just a matter of a certain department or enterprise, but that every citizen should take action and do his best to save and protect water resources.
I miss the blue in my memory, but I have more confidence in the future of the water town.
Junior high school composition 4
Gorky once said: "Books are the ladder of human progress." I like reading since I was a child. Yes, the book is a bright light, guiding us in the direction of progress; Book is a good teacher, teaching us a wealth of knowledge; Books are also a big broom, which can sweep away the dust in our hearts.
When I was a child, my mother bought me a lot of books, including literature, mathematics, popular science and so on, as well as many famous Chinese and foreign books, so reading is destined to become my hobby.
Every time I finish my homework, or at the end of the term, I always take out a book, pour myself a drink, and then sit quietly at my desk, gently open the pages and silently ponder the hearts of the story characters. Experience joys and sorrows with the characters in the book. Gradually, I feel familiar with the characters in the book, playing together, studying together, tasting the sweet fruits together and tasting the hardships together. In this way, my beloved book and I walked through a happy primary school for six years and entered the door of junior high school.
I remember one weekend, I was absorbed in reading, and my mother said to me in a hurry, "go to the supermarket to buy some food." I peeled two apples for you. You must consider eating them! " So, mom put on high heels and went out of the house. I was reading Cao Wenxuan's novel "The Grass House" and was deeply attracted by the story. I didn't understand my mother at all. When I saw the protagonist Sang Sang take off his mosquito net and go fishing, I couldn't help admiring his cleverness and boldness, and I couldn't help laughing. When I saw that I was beaten by his father, I couldn't help feeling sorry for it. I just melted into the book, as if I had become good friends with Sang Sang and went to school together. Time always flies. In a blink of an eye, mom came back to buy food. I didn't even notice when she walked into the room. It was not until she sharply asked me why I didn't eat fruit that I was brought back to reality. I looked at the oxidized fruit on the plate and said falteringly, "I-I was reading a book and forgot." My mother smiled at me. "You are such a bookworm."
Of course, I have many other hobbies, but I haven't had books with me for a long time. In this way, I entered the tense junior high school life with books, and the time I could study was shorter. However, I try my best to find time to read books every day, whether it is extracurricular reading or learning counseling books, which can accompany me through unforgettable nights, comfort my nervous mind and welcome a better tomorrow. Reading, my favorite!