It is a character description skill to want to promote and suppress first. "Yang", which wants to be promoted first and then suppressed, refers to praise and elevation. "Restrain" refers to pressing and belittling. The author wants to praise a character, but he doesn't write from the praise, but first presses it and writes from the opposite derogatory place. In this way, the plot is changeable, ups and downs are formed, resulting in sharp contrast, which is easy to make readers feel suddenly enlightened and leave a deep impression in the reading process.
2) "Yang" and "Suppression" are both artistic means of emphasis. The ancients made an article emphasizing "gaining momentum", and they also talked about the truth of wanting to promote first, suppressing first and then promoting. In the Warring States Policy, there is a story of "Feng Wenke Meng Changjun". At the beginning of the article, it is written that Feng Wen has neither hobbies nor abilities, but also loves to make trouble and complain. It is simply a failure, and the author relegates him to the lowest place. Then he turned to write about how he managed the "Three Caves" for Meng Changjun, and wrote his extraordinary talent. The "suppression" at the beginning is to set off the "Yang" at the back. If you pay attention, such examples are not uncommon in excellent works at all times and in all countries. 3) Using this method, the author should pay attention to the contrast before and after the intonation in the process of conception and writing, and most of them are in the form of opposites. In addition, for the two, we should not be equal, but should focus on the latter. Restraint plays a role as a cushion. The mastery of proportion and weight here can only be carefully understood and pondered through my constant writing practice.
The latest lecture of Simple Learning Network:
Wang Daji talks about college entrance examination poetry appreciation, Wang Daji talks about college entrance examination composition, and Wang Daji talks about classical Chinese reading.
Lin Bin speaks English cloze, Lin Bin speaks English reading comprehension and Li Junhe speaks high school English writing.
2. Students discuss the writing method of the article cicada that we have learned.
3. Write by using the method of wanting to promote and restraining first:
1) Write a person you know.
2) Write about an animal
4. Let's use our brains to draw up questions.
Third, the class composition discussion
1, written by people: discussion of the subject matter
2. Writing about animals: a discussion of the theme.
3. Oral composition.
Fourth, the example is introduced:
1, [Example] "An unusual exam" Tianjin Guo Han
At five or six o'clock in the winter evening, the sun is about to set, and we sit in the classroom, waiting for self-study in the evening. With the clear footsteps, the Chinese teacher came into the classroom.
"Today's evening self-study, we have an exam."
Before the words were finished, the sighs in the classroom were flying all over the sky. Naughty F Jun said: "Yesterday, today, and tomorrow. But when will you be happy? Start writing: enjoy yourself in the exam. The voice just fell and the classroom burst into laughter.
The Chinese teacher didn't get angry, just smiled and said, "Jun F, your speech is good! There is no ancient prose with white back. I didn't explain clearly just now. We don't record the results in today's exam, but we just want to give full play to your potential abilities. Now answer me: what do you think of when you look at the sunset outside the window? "
"Think of the old man." A jun answers first.
"Thinking of being deep and unknown is like thinking."
"Is there anything else?" The teacher asked.
"If you think of tomorrow, the sun will rise again tomorrow. It is no longer a sunset, it will become a sunrise." F jun said without thinking.
"Very good!" The Chinese teacher praised. The students gave warm applause to F Jun's wonderful answer. Just after the first question, the teacher asked the second question: "What should the sunrise be like?"
"Vigorous, energetic."
"Full of confidence and strong vitality."
This time, everyone stood up one by one and said, the atmosphere immediately warmed up. Followed by the third question:
"What kind of sunrise do you want to be, and how can you make your youth look like a sunrise?"
"I hope to be a sunrise full of vigor and vitality forever. I'd better play, imagine and create at will, but … I don't have time." W jun looked very helpless and waved.
"I hope to be a' good boy'-style sunrise, but I always love to play, and' good boy' may be too far away from me." F jun's tone is slightly sorry.
Hearing these words, the Chinese teacher said happily, "In fact, you are all rising sun. As long as you don't study too hard and leave yourself some time and space to play, then your creation will not be just a dream. Think about what you said today, how complete and reasonable, and how good your literary talent is! ……”
This "painful exam" has become so easy, I like it and I am deeply intoxicated by this unusual exam. I really hope that the exams after the "burden reduction" of the younger brothers and sisters are as happy as our exams.
2. In-class comments:
The success of this article. Thanks to the author's ingenious idea-using the method of "restraining before promoting" to express feelings, an unusual exam with a unique face is full of interest, profound meaning and memorable.
The Chinese teacher in the evening self-study class announced the exam, "Sighs have been flying all over the sky in the classroom", and if "F Jun" teased, there was a burst of laughter in the classroom. The teacher took advantage of the situation and started the evening self-study exam with the topic of "Looking at the sunset outside the window, what will you think of". The form was novel and the method was unique. At the end, write "painful exam" and "I like it so easily". This is a way of writing that wants to promote first and restrain first, which makes no sense.
2. "My Uncle"
I have a wonderful uncle who loves me the most and I like him very much. He is a tax collector, usually wearing a big hat, and he is very powerful. Sometimes, he puts a big hat on my head, and I step forward to make everyone laugh. But something happened recently, which made me have a new view of my uncle.
It was Saturday night, and my mother took me to my uncle's house to play. As soon as I entered the door, I found a stranger talking to my uncle. Seeing us come in, the stranger grabbed his uncle's big hat, covered a pile of things on the coffee table in a panic, and got up to leave. I only heard my uncle say, "OK, I'm sure I can do it well!" As he spoke, he walked the man out.
When my uncle went to see Fujian, I curiously lifted the big cap and saw it, ah! I was shocked at once, a thick stack of "great unity"! Hum, uncle can do this shameful thing, what a surprise! I thought angrily. After a while, my uncle came to talk to me, and I pretended not to hear him, just ignoring him.
The next day, my uncle came to my house and asked me what happened yesterday. Did I feel sick? I gave him a white look and said nothing, feeling that my uncle was not pleasing to the eye. To amuse me, he put a big cap on my head and I got rid of it severely.
In the evening, my mother asked me to send fish to grandma. Grandma lives in my uncle's house. Although I am not happy to see my uncle, I can't say no, so I have to go.
I came to my uncle's house, but fortunately I didn't meet my uncle. Thank God. I handed the fish to grandma, turned around and walked out. When I passed my uncle's room, I suddenly heard something moving inside, so I crept open the door and looked inside. Shit, the stranger was in his uncle's house again yesterday. What is he doing here again? I turned my ear to listen to it.
"My fine ..." This is a stranger's voice.
There was silence in the room for a while, and my uncle said, "The last time, you should be fined 5000 yuan to 10000 yuan according to the regulations, but considering that you evaded taxes for the first time, you decided to pay a fine of 5000 yuan. I paid your 2000 yuan yesterday, so you can pay another 3000 yuan tomorrow! Remember in the future, pay taxes consciously, and don't do that ... "Uncle is educating him on tax law. When I heard this, I felt guilty and uneasy. I was wrong about you, my good uncle. I'm sorry!
3. "Want to promote and suppress first" and "Want to suppress and promote first" are two opposite and similar layout methods.
Yang Shuo wrote a famous essay "Litchi Honey". In his article, he said that when he was a child, he always had a bumpy feeling of disgust for it because he was stung by bees. But later, he visited a beekeeping farm in Conghua, Guangdong Province, tasted litchi honey, and listened to the introduction of the old beekeeper, and he suddenly admired the little bee. Its diligent and selfless quality reflected the virtues of the working people in China. This is a typical writing technique. The so-called desire to praise first refers to the object that should be praised vigorously, but at the beginning of writing, it is belittled and criticized.
Lu Xun's Fan Ainong also adopted this technique. 1907 The author is in Japan with Fan Ainong. After Xu Xilin, a revolutionary, was arrested and put to death for assassinating the governor of Anhui, the news spread to Japan, and the international students were greatly indignant. At that time, they gathered to scold the Qing government. Some people advocated sending a telegram to Beijing to protest. However, Fan Ainong said, "If the killer is killed, the dead are dead. Why send a fart telegram?" Xu Xilin, a teacher in Fan Ainong, said such heartless words, so the author said, "I was very angry. I felt that he was not a human being at all. My husband was killed, and I was even afraid to send a telegram ... From then on, I always felt that this Fan Ainong was bizarre and hateful. The hateful people in the world thought they were Manchu at first, then they realized that they were still second; The first is Fan Ainong. China is not revolutionary, and if it wants to be revolutionary, it must first remove Fan Ainong. " At the beginning of the article, Fan Ainong left a very hateful impression on the readers, which was an effort to "suppress". However, in describing their future contacts, Fan Ainong was originally a man who hated evil and was upright and ambitious. The "suppression" in the previous article contrasts the "yang" in the following article.
This writing technique should be natural and reasonable, and must not be forced and stiff.
4. Uncle came back from Taiwan Province.
A few days ago, my father received a letter from his uncle who was living in Taiwan Province, saying that he was going back to his hometown to visit relatives.
I don't want to mention how happy I am. I wonder what gift my uncle will bring me when he comes back all day.
I remember the year before last, my distant uncle came back from Singapore and gave me an advanced snow coat when he left. I wore it, and everyone noticed it. Several students asked me where I bought it. how much is it? I always smile mysteriously: you can't buy it on the mainland. I think my uncle will definitely bring me a better gift when he comes back this time. Well, somehow, I always see my imaginary uncle. Tall, shiny hair, a straight suit, raven leather shoes, and maybe a big suitcase ...
One day, when I came home from school, I saw a lot of people around my door. I guess my uncle must have come back, so I rushed to the door, separated the crowd and squeezed into the house. I saw an old man sitting next to my grandmother, about sixty years old, with a black and thin face covered with wrinkles, gray temples and a simple Chinese tunic suit. Look at that. He's older than my grandfather. I was shocked, this is not my imaginary uncle with grace!
Grandma said first, "This is my grandson Joan." Uncle stretched out a rough and warm hand and pulled me over, stroking my head and saying, "It's much bigger than what I saw in the photo." I let him say whatever he wanted, but he didn't answer. Uncle was silent for a moment, as if thinking of something. He stood up, grabbed the travel bag around him, took out the candy from it and said to the relatives and friends around him, "Thank you for coming to see me. Please sit down. Please sit down." Say, distribute the candy to everyone. After a while, the villagers left one after another, leaving only our family in the house. I took advantage of this gap and glanced around, but I didn't see big boxes and small boxes, only the travel bag was lying quietly. I'm starting to get disappointed.
In the next few days, my uncle always goes out, sometimes accompanied by my father, and often comes home late at night. Sometimes I see him talking and laughing with my grandfather and my father, but I have no interest in listening. I care about gifts, and my uncle never mentioned such things, so I can't help complaining again. I thought to myself, uncle is really a unique "fan ke" The relatives of the neighbors who came back from overseas always brought enviable gifts, but he was so stingy! Students sometimes ask me what my uncle brought me. I am speechless and my face is hot to my ears. Relatives sent pork legs and red eggs according to local customs to "take off the sandals" for uncle, but he asked grandma to return them one by one, and he didn't return them like other fans, causing them to criticize behind their backs.
More than ten days have passed; My uncle is leaving, and I am completely disappointed. I reluctantly followed my father to the station to see me off. At the station, my uncle told my father again and again, "After I leave, you should buy the equipment quickly and write to me in time if there is any situation." As for that primary school, we should add more audio-visual teaching AIDS and sports equipment. " Hearing this, I suddenly froze, and my uncle's image suddenly stood tall in front of my eyes. On my way home, my father told me that my uncle brought back a sum of money this time, and wanted to run two processing factories in the village, and also wanted to fund a primary school. He feels that other guests have done a lot for his hometown, and he often feels guilty.
Ah, uncle, you brought me the best gift for the villagers.
I turned to look at my uncle again, but the car had disappeared at the end of the road. Uncle, I'm waiting for you to go back to your hometown.
use for reference
If you want to promote, suppress first. This paper praises the noble quality of "Uncle" who loves his hometown and longs for his relatives and future generations to live a happy life. The first half of the article belittles "uncle" everywhere: he is so stingy that he doesn't bring any gifts to "me", even a distant uncle is worse; He is so rude, his face is covered with wrinkles, his temples are gray, and he wears a simple Chinese tunic suit. Not the person I imagined at all; He is so unkind, the pig legs and red eggs sent by the villagers are returned one by one, and others are not reciprocated ... Everything is belittling "Uncle", but at the end of the article, from the conversation between "Uncle" and "Dad", we know that he is a generous and affectionate person, and his inner "demeanor" makes people admire and admire him. The author used the method of wanting to promote and restraining first, and received unexpected and touching results.
5, the story of hemp
A-ma is not an earth-shattering big shot. He is just a neighbor in the town when I was a child.
Our town is not big, it's really like a town, and most of it is our Liu family. My house is opposite to Ma's.
Ma is not handsome, even a little ugly, with pockmarked face and lame feet. We children don't like him very much.
I remember that at that time, the persimmons in the garden were ripe, and several friends and I sneaked into the persimmon forest to steal persimmons and ate them, and Ma caught them. "Good, little girl, stealing persimmons again. Go and see your father!" I can't help but drag me away. I was stubborn and didn't leave. Some of my friends hugged his waist and some hit him on the head with persimmons. I struggled out and ran away. Running, running, missing Ma, let's not mention how happy we are. Needless to say, he was later severely beaten by his father, so he hated aunt.
There is a small river next to our town. It is said that it is not small. Every time we go to school and go to town, we have to go around a big circle. I don't know where Ma got a small wooden boat to ferry us, and it didn't charge us anything, so we were sent across the river for free. Adults all said that Ma had accumulated virtue. However, it didn't take long for Ma to charge, and adults and children had to pay 30 cents for a boat trip. Another month later, it actually rose to one yuan. The adults were very angry, and they all said that Ma was too wicked and ripped off one of their own. Ma said nothing, just ferrying back and forth to collect money, and her face often showed excitement. Gradually, people found that Ma lost weight, and the strength of boating was not as great as before, so people complained that Ma even gave up her life to make money. Finally, a big one, Ma fell ill. According to the doctor, it's cancer, and I won't live long. At this time, a stone bridge began to be built on the river. Ma's condition is getting worse day by day, and the small stone bridge is about to be completed day by day.
Ma finally died, on the day when the small stone bridge was completed. After a burst of firecrackers, the mayor spoke. He didn't say much. Later, he said, "This small stone bridge was built by Ma, who saved the corner of the ferry. Ma knew that he had cancer for a long time, but he never said it. When she died, Ama still remembered the people in the town. He hoped that the people in the town would forgive him. Ama's ferry fare was so expensive, all for our town! " As the mayor talked, he cried, and many adults in the town began to sob. Even we children felt our eyes were wet. Alas, Ma, we have misunderstood him!
Later, I don't know which skillful craftsman carved a bust of Ah Ma on the small stone bridge, so that Ah Ma could watch the children in the town go to school happily every day, and the adults went to the city to do business with joy.
use for reference
(1) to promote the first suppression. The hero of the article is hemp; What kind of person is this hemp? The article begins with the appearance of A Ma: "His face is pockmarked and his feet are lame." No wonder children "don't like him. A Ma is fierce to children, either scratching or pulling, and children" hate his guts ". As for the adults, they also have comments on Ah Ma, because he collects ferry fare, and in less than a month, it has risen from the triangle to one yuan. People say that he is "wicked" and "ripped off", and even Ah Ma has lost weight, and he is also sarcastic that he "has given up his life to make money". It can be seen that the article first suppressed the person, Ma, and then suppressed it. It wasn't until a stone bridge was built on the river and Ma died that the mayor revealed that the stone bridge was built by Ma dividing the ferry fees collected. In this way, in this article, a seemingly disgusting person with noble qualities is established. What is used here is the strategy of suppressing first and then promoting.
② The winding path leads to seclusion. The author's intention in writing this article is to praise the noble quality of working people. However, the article did not say it directly, but described some things that seemed that Ma's quality was not noble. In particular, it was written that Ma bought a boat and ferried for free from the ferry to build a bridge, but soon she received a fee, and the ferry fee soared. It was not until the end that it was written that Ama collected the ferry fee precisely to build a stone bridge and do good for the people. In this way, the article shows a noble and respectable ordinary person in twists and turns.
6. Listen to the report
There is a blue advertising paper on the bulletin board, which is written in bold font: Dr. Huang Yan, a graduate student studying in Britain, will give a lecture. Venue: dining room; Time: 3: 30 pm on September 20th.
"What's the long story? I'm determined to become a talent. I want to be a good student. It's not the same old story!" I muttered in my heart, conveniently took this book "Heart has Qian Qian Knot" and walked into the meeting.
"It's better to read Qiong Yao's book than to listen to him brag and shake his prestige." I think.
The report began, and Huang Yan stood upright on the podium in a suit and tie.
"Students, I am not a great man ..." Unnecessary modesty.
"I'm the first doctoral student in China to get a scholarship from Cambridge University in England ..."-a lot of tone.
"I just want to say something you haven't heard of." -don't be conventional.
"Please give me 40 minutes." -it's refreshing.
"If you want to make a difference, you must have as wide a knowledge as possible ..."-I agree.
"Science and art are interlinked, and students who are good at mathematics and physics must never despise Chinese ..."-Yes, it is best for those who study science to have literary talent.
"I am arrogant, but pride is not necessarily wrong ..."-It seems strange, but I agree that people should have a little pride.
"When I was in my alma mater, it was difficult for teachers to agree that I was a good student ..."-Yo, it turned out to be a "similar item" with me!
"Pa"-the book in my hand slipped to the ground, and my eyes stung him straight, for fear of missing every word he said in my ears. The meeting was strangely quiet. The hearts of hundreds of listeners seemed to be attracted and melted by his heart.
This is the most vivid report I have ever heard!
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(1) to promote the first suppression. In my opinion, the content of the report organized by the school is "old-fashioned", and it is nothing more than a determination to become a good student, and it is always long and makes people feel sleepy. After listening to the report this time, "I" concluded that it was no exception, so I brought a novel book into the meeting. This is the "suppression" of listening to the report. However, this report is an exception. The more you listen to it, the more energetic you get. The book you concentrate on falls to the ground, knowing that you don't pick it up. "Keep your eyes on him, and your ears are afraid to miss every word he says." This is "Yang", praising the report for its good content and short report time. The full text is suppressed first and then promoted, and the suppression is for the sake of promotion.
2 Yizhuang is also harmonious. This is a vivid and fascinating report (it's a pity that the author seldom writes about the contents of the report), and the writing style is also very humorous and unique. After recording some words of the speaker, the author's comments are inserted, such as "unnecessary modesty", "I agree" and "similar items with me", which are humorous and interesting.