Although this poem has some shortcomings in meter, it is not old-fashioned.

Old cadre style refers to a kind of poem that has no bearing and emotional sustenance, but is full of praise and rhetoric. It is called "old cadre style" only because this kind of poetry is often seen in the works of contemporary old cadres. It doesn't mean that poems written by veteran cadres are called veteran cadres.

For example, the following seven methods are authentic veteran cadres:

Red flag countries * * * and China always sing.

In the past 30 years, feng shui has turned round and round, and the six ranks in the Spring and Autumn Period have returned.

North and South merchants hoarded jade and silk, and East and West joined hands to make peace.

There are endless laughter in the mountains, and there are many benefits to rejuvenating the country through science and education.

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In addition, in reply to our predecessors, we don't decide whether a poem is old-fashioned because of our personal feelings and thoughts, nor can we classify it into or out of old-fashioned works freely and subjectively. The world has rules, and then it becomes a square. This poem is really not old-fashioned, so all the predecessors decided at a glance that this poem is not old-fashioned, but it is by no means from personal feelings.

The old style is indeed a major drawback and obstacle to our study, research and development of traditional poetry, and its disadvantages can never be perfunctory by simply saying "misleading others" or "people's feelings at that time"

The so-called poetry, first of all, is the external expression of the poet's most sincere and passionate feelings. Mr. Zhong Jingwen once said, "The truth that sings because of the heartbeat is a poem". Poetry must go deep into the soul, the poet's own soul and the reader's soul. What we value today is the flow of meter, but this is at the end of the poem.

How different it is from the old courtiers who blindly praise long live the old cadres! It is not only the poet's sorrow, but also a cancer of social culture and a blasphemy against traditional culture!

The clear sky is rude, perhaps the language is a little sharp, but it is only out of love for poetry. I hope [Dead Wood Knife] will forgive me ... Clear sky apologizes again and again. ...

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Attached are two well-known old-style poems by Mr. Guo Moruo. I hope you can know more clearly what is "old-fashioned" from the comparison of these two words.

The first poem was written at the end of the Cultural Revolution, and the whole poem eulogized the vigorous cultural revolution in China.

Water adjustment. Celebrate the tenth anniversary of the great proletarian cultural revolution.

—— Guo Moruo1May 976 12

The "Notice" spread all over the world, the Cultural Revolution. Outline of class struggle, arrived in Liu Helin. Ten years of wind and rain in spring, I like to watch the flowers fall and the warblers make brocade in bloom. Grow new seedlings and thrive, and the world will sing.

Capitalist, struggling, Deng Xiaoping [against harmony]. In an attempt to go backwards, Nai "overturned the case unpopular". The "three cardinal guides and five permanent members" were criticized to pieces, and the crime of restoration was angered. The chairman waved his hand and marched forward.

The second song was written only five months after the first one, but with a change of pen, it was directed at the shortcomings of the Cultural Revolution.

Water melody smashed the gang of four [anti-harmony]

Finding out four "anti-harmony" gangs is really gratifying. Political hooligan, literati, dog head strategist Zhang. There are also thin bones, and the sky is the marquis of Wu, and the broom sweeps the light. People who usurp the party and seize power have dreams.

Ambitious, scheming, scheming. It's a crime to say this plainly, persecuting the red sun. His successor is Jie Jun, whose legacy is decisive and his achievements are brilliant. Support China's [anti-harmony] seat, and support the CPC Central Committee.

It's not just veteran cadres who write about veteran cadres. Under the pressure of environment, even great writers may give in.

It's not that contemporary people criticize veteran cadres, but that they really don't have sincere feelings.

It does not mean that people who write about veteran cadres will be treated coldly. Mr. Guo Moruo is still respected and admired today. People who study poetry always judge things, regardless of people.

Above.

The clear sky is rude again ... please be honest. ...