In the comprehensive learning activities, we have more understanding and feelings about rural life and rural scenery. Let's share the gains of learning together. You can talk about your feelings and experiences about rural scenery, you can also show your collected pictures and written materials, and you can also talk about what you saw and heard in the activities, and so on. Communicate in the group first, and then choose representatives to introduce them in the class. Then evaluate who has gained a lot and is deeply touched.
On the basis of oral communication, write down what you want to write most. You can write about your own experience, what you heard, saw or thought, what you saw, what you saw, what you felt or experienced. When writing, you should express clearly what you want to write. Read it carefully, and then change it after writing it.
Walking on the country road, you will smell the fragrance of melons and fruits; By the pond at night, you will hear frogs singing; On the vast grassland, you will see flocks of cattle and sheep ... write down what you want to write most. You can write what you have experienced, what you have heard, what you have seen and what you have thought, whether it is scenery, people or things, or feelings or experiences. When writing, you should clearly express what you want to write and pay attention to the use of accumulated beautiful words.
Then, dear children, if your hometown is in the countryside, how can we describe our favorite and most beautiful hometown?
First of all, we should pay attention to choosing "scenery" and highlight the characteristics of our hometown. Describing a scene can't be like taking pictures. When the camera is aimed at it, everything there is photographed. You should choose those distinctive scenery to describe. After selecting the "scene" to be written, it is necessary to see if there is any repetition in it. If there is, it will be deleted. What "scene" to write is decided, so think carefully: what to write about it? This can be considered from its shape, color and other aspects. Pay attention to objective facts when describing. Scenery in nature is often related to seasons and regions. Throughout the year, within one day, the scenery is different at different times; Far away, mountains and rivers and fields, different places, the scenery will not be the same. Even at the same time and place, sometimes the scenery will change due to the interaction of natural phenomena. It can be seen that the description of the scenery must conform to the local real situation at that time.
Secondly, we should pay attention to the combination of scenery writing and lyric. Since you love your hometown so much, you should integrate your thoughts and feelings into the scenery when describing the scenery of your hometown, so that the natural scenery will become flesh and blood and reach the realm of scene blending. There are generally two ways to express feelings; One is direct lyricism, or "expressing one's mind directly", which is a lyric way to directly express one's inner feelings. Direct lyric can express one's feelings and attitudes towards the scenery first, and then describe the scenery, or describe the scenery in detail first, and then express one's feelings. Another way of writing is to integrate your feelings into the description of the scenery and express your feelings between the lines, so that readers can feel while reading. This is the writing of "lyric in the scene" and "scene blending". This kind of writing not only uses emotional words to express, but also uses rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification to give the scenery a human touch and express the author's feelings. Of course, the emotions to be expressed must be true and not "worried about adding new words".
In addition, when writing landscapes, we should also pay attention to clarity and order. The scenes described should be organically linked in a certain order, so that the hometown style described can leave a clear and organized impression on readers.
The river in my hometown.
There is a winding river in my hometown, feeding the children on the plain with sweet milk. It brings endless fun to hometown people, and the villagers call it "Mother River".
Spring girl came with beautiful dance steps, and the river blossomed, with a "spray" and played the movement of people. Groups of little black crows kept chirping, waking up trees and grass and calling out flowers. On the bank of the river, it is full of vitality. Sister Liu pulled out the green branches and washed her long hair by the river. Her graceful figure is reflected on the water. Several sparrows are whispering in the branches. Green grass hand in hand, Qi Xin joined forces to weave a green carpet. There are several beautiful flowers on the lawn, which give off bursts of fragrance. In the river, several big white geese are looking up at the blue sky and singing poems. How charming!
In summer, the sun is shining, and this river has become our paradise. At noon, it's cold, and under the willows by the river, it's full of folks enjoying the cool. There are naked children, naked men and women. The smiling woman is eating melon seeds. 10-year-old boy jumped into the river happily, had a water fight, took a bath and was as happy as a group of lively ducklings. We "landlubbers" looked at their joy and couldn't help but move our hearts. But we can't swim, so we just sit on the shore and let the running water hit our little feet, splashing a touching splash. How comfortable and comfortable!
Autumn has come and the river is more beautiful and charming. In the golden sunshine, the river beat the rocks on the shore rhythmically, splashing a string of glittering and translucent water drops. Just like a girl who can sing and dance, so gentle and so strong, she pursues her ideals day and night. The calm river glowed with golden light under the sunlight, as if 10,000 pearls had fallen into the river. A gust of wind blew and the river rippled. Flocks of small fish jump out of the water from time to time, gently spitting small bubbles. Our children were ecstatic when they saw it and went fishing with homemade fishing rods and nets. Some sit by the river, holding their breath for the little fish to take the bait; Some, impatient, simply picked up the bottle, rolled up their trouser legs and went fishing by the river barefoot. Sometimes I accidentally fall down, but when I get up, I make a face at you and smile. At night, the moonlight melted, and several of our friends came to the river with lanterns, crept to catch crabs, and more or less caught some food. It is really delicious!
In winter, it is covered with snow and the river freezes, which has become our natural skating rink. We played and sang to our heart's content. The elder sister pushes the younger brother, and the younger brother protects the younger sister, pushing and shoving, and having a good time. Hold the fall, get up and rub your ass, and you'll forget it after a while. Of course, when we are covered in ice slag, we will inevitably be trained when we go back, but we are still happy!
This river is really beautiful. It sympathizes with the flowers and trees along the way with a clear voice. With its graceful dance, it sets off a hot land that breeds spring flowers and autumn fruits. I love you, the river in my hometown! Love your energy, love your simplicity. It is you who have raised the hardworking people in your hometown; It is you who bring endless fun to your hometown.
I like the fields in autumn.
Flowers bloom and flowers fall, and spring is lovely; Autumn with melons and fruits everywhere is even more pleasing to the eye. After the rain cleared, the autumn was crisp, and I walked happily on my way home with my schoolbag on my back.
I climbed up the big river bank happily. Ah! A magnificent picture is immediately displayed: the village surrounded by trees is filled with smoke, and the roads crisscross, dividing the vast land into checkerboard grids. The trees on the roadside stand tall and naturally enclose the land with a tall green wall.
Look! The sweet potato plants here are like green and yellow silk carpets. The cotton field under the river bank is like an endless white ocean. A breeze blows and the cotton leaves rustle. On the other side is the advanced corn variety "Lunan 1", like an endless forest.
Walking down the levee, strolling on the field path, and taking a closer look at the cotton field, the branches were bent by the heavy cotton peaches, which seemed to jingle like two bells, and the cotton leaves were wet. Many cotton peaches spit out snow-white cotton wool, and there are some small water drops on the cotton wool, which are crystal clear. Leave the cotton field and come to the corn field. It is more lively here. Look! A plant is more than one person's height, with a horn-shaped corncob more than a foot long on the thick stem, and the corncob shows golden teeth. Who doesn't like it? Hey, look! How beautiful the corn is. The leaves are covered with crystal drops, like pearls. The breeze blew gently, and the corn seemed to feel a little cold. It trembled a few times, and some pearls suddenly got into the soil. You might be sorry, right? Don't! They fell down to nourish fertile land and contribute their strength to the people.
In the field, on the wasteland reclaimed by farmers, red sorghum is holding a red torch high. A gust of wind blew, and sorghum swayed like a toddler. Sorghum leaves collide with each other and make a rustling sound. It's really lively. You see, in the bean field over there, the bean sprouts are hand in hand and shake their heads gently. Hey! A string of big hairy pods, one after another, really cute.
Looking at the beautiful autumn colors, how can you not make people feel ups and downs? Heroes, dear party, all these changes are brought by you! I believe that with the rapid development of the motherland's construction, the autumn colors of tomorrow will be ten million times more beautiful than today.
Bamboo Garden in Hometown
My family lives in a beautiful and lovely mountain village. Surrounded by Zhushan tea garden, it looks like a tall green city wall. My favorite is the green bamboo garden.
Whenever spring hasn't come, small bamboo shoots grow silently in the ground. At this time, people call it mass bamboo shoots, also called winter bamboo shoots. Because the group bamboo shoots are delicious, all major cities use big trucks to buy them from us. Before and after the Spring Festival, delicious bamboo shoots are indispensable on the dining table, which are loved by men, women and children. When we arrived in Tomb-Sweeping Day, yellow bamboo shoots emerged from the ground like newly hatched chickens, like small pagodas. Its tip must be dark green, and the bamboo shoots are obviously covered with a layer of furry hair, so people call them bamboo shoots. Bamboo shoots have tenacious vitality, no matter how many stones are pressed on them, dozens of pounds, bamboo shoots can overturn them. People choose according to the quality of bamboo shoots, leave the thin ones and cultivate them into bamboo. In late spring, bamboo shoots grow into tender ones and their shells are peeled off. People pick up bamboo shoot shells to make paper or make sofa cushions. The shelled bamboo is light green, and there is a circle of white at the bamboo joints. Young bamboo grows into broken bamboo first, and then young leaves grow, which is greener than old bamboo. This tender bamboo is a good raw material for paper making.
In the hot summer, the wind is blowing hard, and the bamboo forest rolls up green waves, making a sound and surging. After coming back from work, we often play in the bamboo forest. Some friends wear hats made of bamboo sticks on their heads, and we sometimes swing with bamboo sticks, which is very interesting. On a sunny morning, I like reading in the bamboo garden. The breeze blows the bamboo leaves, the bamboo garden rings, and the chirping birds gather in the bamboo forest, singing melodious songs, playing music for the green sea in the mountain bay and praising the beautiful hometown.
In the crisp autumn of September, slender bamboo shoots grow underground. We dug whip bamboo shoots up the mountain and added a bowl of delicious bamboo shoot soup to the dish.
In winter, the flowers fade, but the bamboo is still so handsome and tall, and there are more or less snowflakes floating on the bamboo leaves, which are as white as jade and very elegant.
The spirit of bamboo is precious. It silently contributes to mankind, such as bamboo beds, bamboo chairs, baskets, craft bamboo weaving and so on. Bamboo products can also be exported to earn foreign exchange and serve the four modernizations. I love my hometown, and I love my hometown bamboo garden.